r18193 - htdocs/trunk/news - Update some spelling

[Phil Longstaff]

Author: plongstaff
Date: 2009-07-07 20:28:39 -0400 (Tue, 07 Jul 2009)
New Revision: 18193
Trac: http://svn.gnucash.org/trac/changeset/18193

Modified:
   htdocs/trunk/news/090707-2.3.2.news
Log:
Update some spelling


Modified: htdocs/trunk/news/090707-2.3.2.news
===================================================================
--- htdocs/trunk/news/090707-2.3.2.news	2009-07-07 23:41:03 UTC (rev 18192)
+++ htdocs/trunk/news/090707-2.3.2.news	2009-07-08 00:28:39 UTC (rev 18193)
@@ -3,14 +3,8 @@
 
 <h2>GnuCash 2.3.2 released</h2>
 
-<p>The GnuCash development team proudly announces GnuCash 2.3.2, 
-the third of several unstable 2.3.x releases of the GnuCash 
-Free Accounting Software which will eventually lead to the stable
-version 2.4.0. With this new release series, GnuCash can use an SQL
-database using SQLite3, MySQL or PostgreSQL. It runs on GNU/Linux,
-*BSD, Solaris, Microsoft Windows and Mac OSX. This release is intended for developers
-and testers who want to help tracking down all those bugs that are still in there.</p>
-<p> WARNING WARNING WARNING - Make sure you make backups of any files used in testing versions of GnuCash in the 2.3.x series. Although the developers go to great lengths to ensure that no data will be lost we cannot guarentee that your data will not be affected if for some reason GnuCash crashes in testing these releases.</p>
+<p>The GnuCash development team proudly announces GnuCash 2.3.2, the third of several unstable 2.3.x releases of the GnuCash Free Accounting Software which will eventually lead to the stable version 2.4.0. With this new release series, GnuCash can use an SQL database using SQLite3, MySQL or PostgreSQL. It runs on GNU/Linux, *BSD, Solaris, Microsoft Windows and Mac OSX. This release is intended for developers and testers who want to help tracking down all those bugs that are still in there.</p>
+<p> WARNING WARNING WARNING - Make sure you make backups of any files used in testing versions of GnuCash in the 2.3.x series. Although the developers go to great lengths to ensure that no data will be lost we cannot guarantee that your data will not be affected if for some reason GnuCash crashes in testing these releases.</p>
 <p>PLEASE TEST TEST AND TEST SOME MORE any and all features important to you.
 Then post any bugs you find to bugzilla</p>
 <p>Major changes in the 2.3.x release include;
@@ -64,19 +58,10 @@
 involved.</p>
 
 <p><b>How can you help?</b></p>
-<p>Testing: Test it and help us discover all bugs that might show up in there.
-Please enter each and every bug into bugzilla.</p>
-<p>Translating: The new release comes with some new translation strings. If
-you consider contributing a translation, we invite you to test this release
-already. A string freeze will be announced in one of the later 2.3.x releases.
-Please check http://wiki.gnucash.org/wiki/Translation_Status for updates on
-this.</p>
+<p>Testing: Test it and help us discover all bugs that might show up in there.  Please enter each and every bug into bugzilla.</p>
+<p>Translating: The new release comes with some new translation strings. If you consider contributing a translation, we invite you to test this release already. A string freeze will be announced in one of the later 2.3.x releases.  Please check http://wiki.gnucash.org/wiki/Translation_Status for updates on this.</p>
 <p></p>
-<p>We would like to encourage people to test this and any further releases as
-much as possible and submit bug reports in order that we can polish GnuCash to
-be as stable as possible for the 2.4.0 release in a few weeks. Then post any
-bugs you find to <a
-href="http://bugzilla.gnome.org/enter_bug.cgi?product=GnuCash">bugzilla</a></p>
+<p>We would like to encourage people to test this and any further releases as much as possible and submit bug reports in order that we can polish GnuCash to be as stable as possible for the 2.4.0 release in a few weeks. Then post any bugs you find to <a href="http://bugzilla.gnome.org/enter_bug.cgi?product=GnuCash">bugzilla</a></p>
 <p><b>Getting GnuCash</b></p>
 <p>GnuCash 2.3.2 can be downloaded from www.gnucash.org.  It is available as source code.</p>
 <p>To install GnuCash, users will need Gnome 2, guile, slib and swig.</p>
@@ -84,7 +69,4 @@
 <p><b>Win32 binary</b></p>
 <p>The Gnucash 2.3.2 Win32 setup executable can be downloaded from http://code.gnucash.org/builds/win32/trunk</p>
 <p><b>About the Program</b></p>
-<p>GnuCash is a free, open source accounting program released under the GNU
-General Public License (GPL) and available for GNU/Linux, *BSD, Solaris,
-Mac OSX and Microsoft Windows.  Programming on GnuCash began in 1997, and its first stable release was in
-1998.</p>
+<p>GnuCash is a free, open source accounting program released under the GNU General Public License (GPL) and available for GNU/Linux, *BSD, Solaris, Mac OSX and Microsoft Windows.  Programming on GnuCash began in 1997, and its first stable release was in 1998.</p>