r19748 - gnucash-docs/trunk/help/C - help: More edits for brevity

[Yawar Amin]

Author: yawaramin
Date: 2010-11-02 22:59:34 -0400 (Tue, 02 Nov 2010)
New Revision: 19748
Trac: http://svn.gnucash.org/trac/changeset/19748

Modified:
   gnucash-docs/trunk/help/C/Help_ch_Customize.xml
Log:
help: More edits for brevity

Delete more redundant screenshot descriptions; move helpful descriptions of
some preferences tabs to screenshots' caption elements.

Modified: gnucash-docs/trunk/help/C/Help_ch_Customize.xml
===================================================================
--- gnucash-docs/trunk/help/C/Help_ch_Customize.xml	2010-11-03 00:28:28 UTC (rev 19747)
+++ gnucash-docs/trunk/help/C/Help_ch_Customize.xml	2010-11-03 02:59:34 UTC (rev 19748)
@@ -368,9 +368,6 @@
     <sect2 id="prefs-general">
       <title>General</title>
 
-      <para>In <guilabel>General</guilabel>, you will see the default settings
-      shown here:</para>
-
       <screenshot id="Prefer_General">
         <mediaobject>
           <imageobject>
@@ -487,9 +484,6 @@
     <sect2 id="prefs-online">
       <title>Online Banking</title>
 
-      <para>In <guilabel>Online Banking</guilabel>, you will see the default
-      settings shown here:</para>
-
       <screenshot id="Prefer_OnlineBanking">
         <mediaobject>
           <imageobject>
@@ -589,12 +583,6 @@
 
     <sect2 id="prefs-printing">
       <title>Printing</title>
-      <para>
-      In this tab you could set some options that affects the printing on paper of checks.
-      </para>
-      
-      <para>In <guilabel>Printing</guilabel>, you will see the default
-      settings shown here:</para>
 
       <screenshot id="Prefer_Printing">
         <mediaobject>
@@ -608,7 +596,9 @@
           </textobject>
 
           <caption>
-            <para>The <guilabel>Printing</guilabel> tab</para>
+            <para>The <guilabel>Printing</guilabel> tab allows you to set
+            some options that affect the printing on paper of
+            checks.</para>
           </caption>
         </mediaobject>
       </screenshot>
@@ -636,9 +626,6 @@
     <sect2 id="prefs-reg">
       <title>Register</title>
 
-      <para>In <guilabel>Register</guilabel>, you will see the default
-      settings shown here:</para>
-
       <screenshot id="Prefer_Register">
         <mediaobject>
           <imageobject>
@@ -749,12 +736,6 @@
     <sect2 id="prefs-reg-def">
       <title>Register Defaults</title>
 
-      <para>The <guilabel>Register Defaults</guilabel> preferences item
-      affects the behavoir of the transaction register windows.</para>
-
-      <para>In <guilabel>Register</guilabel>, you will see the default
-      settings shown here:</para>
-
       <screenshot id="Prefer_RegisterDefaults">
         <mediaobject>
           <imageobject>
@@ -767,7 +748,9 @@
           </textobject>
 
           <caption>
-            <para>The <guilabel>Register Defaults</guilabel> tab</para>
+            <para>The <guilabel>Register Defaults</guilabel> tab
+            preferences affect the behavior of the transaction register
+            windows.</para>
           </caption>
         </mediaobject>
       </screenshot>
@@ -833,12 +816,7 @@
 
     <sect2 id="prefs-reports">
       <title>Reports</title>
-      <para>The <guilabel>Reports</guilabel> preferences item affects the
-      behavior of the reports window.</para>
 
-      <para>In <guilabel>Reports</guilabel>, you will see the default settings
-      shown here:</para>
-
       <screenshot id="Prefer_Reports">
         <mediaobject>
           <imageobject>
@@ -851,7 +829,9 @@
           </textobject>
 
           <caption>
-            <para>The <guilabel>Reports</guilabel> tab</para>
+            <para>The <guilabel>Reports</guilabel> tab preferences affect
+            the behavior of <application>&app;</application>
+            reports.</para>
           </caption>
         </mediaobject>
       </screenshot>
@@ -888,14 +868,7 @@
     
     <sect2 id="prefs-sched">
       <title>Scheduled Transactions</title>
-      <para>The <guilabel>Scheduled Transactions</guilabel> preferences item
-      affects the behavior of <application>&app;</application> for scheduling transactions. More
-      information about scheduled transactions can be found in 
-      <xref linkend="trans-sched"></xref> of this document.</para>
 
-      <para>In <guilabel>Scheduled Transactions</guilabel>, you will see the
-      default settings shown here:</para>
-
       <screenshot id="Prefer_ScheduledTransactions">
         <mediaobject>
           <imageobject>
@@ -908,7 +881,11 @@
           </textobject>
 
           <caption>
-            <para>The <guilabel>Scheduled Transactions</guilabel> tab</para>
+            <para>The <guilabel>Scheduled Transactions</guilabel> tab
+            preferences affect the behavior of
+            <application>&app;</application> for scheduling transactions.
+            More information about scheduled transactions can be found in
+            <xref linkend="trans-sched"/>.</para>
           </caption>
         </mediaobject>
       </screenshot>
@@ -956,9 +933,6 @@
     <sect2 id="prefs-window">
       <title>Windows</title>
 
-      <para>In <guilabel>Windows</guilabel>, you will see the default settings
-      shown here:</para>
-
       <screenshot id="Prefer_Windows">
         <mediaobject>
           <imageobject>