r19751 - gnucash-docs/branches/2.2/help/C - Backport r19748: help: More edits for brevity

[Yawar Amin]

Author: yawaramin
Date: 2010-11-03 00:43:37 -0400 (Wed, 03 Nov 2010)
New Revision: 19751
Trac: http://svn.gnucash.org/trac/changeset/19751

Modified:
   gnucash-docs/branches/2.2/help/C/Help_ch_Customize.xml
Log:
Backport r19748: help: More edits for brevity

Modified: gnucash-docs/branches/2.2/help/C/Help_ch_Customize.xml
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--- gnucash-docs/branches/2.2/help/C/Help_ch_Customize.xml	2010-11-03 04:43:30 UTC (rev 19750)
+++ gnucash-docs/branches/2.2/help/C/Help_ch_Customize.xml	2010-11-03 04:43:37 UTC (rev 19751)
@@ -365,9 +365,6 @@
     <sect2 id="prefs-general">
       <title>General</title>
 
-      <para>In <guilabel>General</guilabel>, you will see the default settings
-      shown here:</para>
-
       <screenshot id="Prefer_General">
         <mediaobject>
           <imageobject>
@@ -484,9 +481,6 @@
     <sect2 id="prefs-online">
       <title>Online Banking</title>
 
-      <para>In <guilabel>Online Banking</guilabel>, you will see the default
-      settings shown here:</para>
-
       <screenshot id="Prefer_OnlineBanking">
         <mediaobject>
           <imageobject>
@@ -587,9 +581,6 @@
     <sect2 id="prefs-reg">
       <title>Register</title>
 
-      <para>In <guilabel>Register</guilabel>, you will see the default
-      settings shown here:</para>
-
       <screenshot id="Prefer_Register">
         <mediaobject>
           <imageobject>
@@ -700,12 +691,6 @@
     <sect2 id="prefs-reg-def">
       <title>Register Defaults</title>
 
-      <para>The <guilabel>Register Defaults</guilabel> preferences item
-      affects the behavoir of the transaction register windows.</para>
-
-      <para>In <guilabel>Register</guilabel>, you will see the default
-      settings shown here:</para>
-
       <screenshot id="Prefer_RegisterDefaults">
         <mediaobject>
           <imageobject>
@@ -718,7 +703,9 @@
           </textobject>
 
           <caption>
-            <para>The <guilabel>Register Defaults</guilabel> tab</para>
+            <para>The <guilabel>Register Defaults</guilabel> tab
+            preferences affect the behavior of the transaction register
+            windows.</para>
           </caption>
         </mediaobject>
       </screenshot>
@@ -784,12 +771,7 @@
 
     <sect2 id="prefs-reports">
       <title>Reports</title>
-      <para>The <guilabel>Reports</guilabel> preferences item affects the
-      behavior of the reports window.</para>
 
-      <para>In <guilabel>Reports</guilabel>, you will see the default settings
-      shown here:</para>
-
       <screenshot id="Prefer_Reports">
         <mediaobject>
           <imageobject>
@@ -802,7 +784,9 @@
           </textobject>
 
           <caption>
-            <para>The <guilabel>Reports</guilabel> tab</para>
+            <para>The <guilabel>Reports</guilabel> tab preferences affect
+            the behavior of <application>&app;</application>
+            reports.</para>
           </caption>
         </mediaobject>
       </screenshot>
@@ -839,14 +823,7 @@
     
     <sect2 id="prefs-sched">
       <title>Scheduled Transactions</title>
-      <para>The <guilabel>Scheduled Transactions</guilabel> preferences item
-      affects the behavior of <application>&app;</application> for scheduling transactions. More
-      information about scheduled transactions can be found in 
-      <xref linkend="trans-sched"></xref> of this document.</para>
 
-      <para>In <guilabel>Scheduled Transactions</guilabel>, you will see the
-      default settings shown here:</para>
-
       <screenshot id="Prefer_ScheduledTransactions">
         <mediaobject>
           <imageobject>
@@ -859,7 +836,11 @@
           </textobject>
 
           <caption>
-            <para>The <guilabel>Scheduled Transactions</guilabel> tab</para>
+            <para>The <guilabel>Scheduled Transactions</guilabel> tab
+            preferences affect the behavior of
+            <application>&app;</application> for scheduling transactions.
+            More information about scheduled transactions can be found in
+            <xref linkend="trans-sched"/>.</para>
           </caption>
         </mediaobject>
       </screenshot>
@@ -907,9 +888,6 @@
     <sect2 id="prefs-window">
       <title>Windows</title>
 
-      <para>In <guilabel>Windows</guilabel>, you will see the default settings
-      shown here:</para>
-
       <screenshot id="Prefer_Windows">
         <mediaobject>
           <imageobject>